22 Mart 2010 Pazartesi

Task 6

*have a great experience <--|
   -meet a lot of student         |
   -other countries                  |
   -improve life experience ---| 


*have  along vacation <--------------------|
    -work a company                                |
    -improve their language                     |
    -after finish the job to go on a trip ---|


*have a cheap cost of ownership<----|
     -apply on time                               |
     -cheaper than the others------------|
    
   There are three positive effects of joining a work and travel abroad program. The first effect of joining a work and travel abroad program is that students have a great expecience during this program. Participating students have a chance to meet a lot of students from other countries. As a result of this,they can improve their experience in life. The second effect of joining a work and travel abroad program is that students have a long vacation during this program. In addition to students work for a company. This also contributes to improving their language skills. And then, after finishing the job,students go on a trip to foreign country. The last second positive effects is that has cheap cost of ownership. If you apply on the time, this program will be cheaper than the other campaign. To sum up, joining a work and travel abroad program improves the students in every respect and contributes to their life time experience.


1 yorum:

  1. for the last major supporting chain you can give examples.. please don't forget to add examples when writing effect / cause paragraph!!!

    focus, grammar, Ts, conclusion, connectors are well used:)

    keep up the good work!!! :)

    and give more examples..

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